[2013년 외교아카데미:시니어]

주한독일 대사관상

& 우수에세이상(코리아헤럴드 명예기자) : 김채윤 (중3)

1. Recently, Julian Assage and Edward Snowden have leaked out the top secret and was regarded as "A whistle blower? Due to this, all the secrets have spreaded throughout the world and gave a huge impact on America's industry. Of course, they are also under international criticism and shame. In this aspect, I must say that the whistle blowers are the betrayers of the country.

To start with, it doesn't make sense of why the 'blowers' had to leak all the information with the purpose to protect the human rights. Is this the only solution that they could have done? They might have had better ways than this - such as negotiation, campaign and promoting the immorality, only the injustice throughout the world. What if the America's economy plummets in a high rate, and what if the people in all over the world does boycott when hearing the ímmorality of US industry? Damaging the countries as it is, is the same as damaging the whole people and themselves at all.
 

In addition, they were the people who went through the organization with a promise that they will try hard to promote & increase the sales rate of its company. It can be such a paradox that these people violating these rules and giving such a damage in the company where they work. Once, cheulsoo Ahn, the great enterpreteneur said that 'the person working in firms must know this - They should act in a way that they can keep their country, and its benefit. And when you saw their immorality, it's okay to do something but do not harm or damage your own country. Always think wise? In tho point, since they lowered America's credit and economy, they should be regarded as a betrayer.

Looking into the behaviors that Assange and Snowden have committed, we can see that they dealing the problem in such a foolish and old-fashioned way - An eye for an eye, and teeth for a teeth? In this point of view, they are not working as the protector of human rights. Rather, this can be seen as no more than a 'matter of retaliation.'

In our lives, there are many kinds of solutions that we can choose when faced such an injustice - and the 'Whistle Blowers' might have also had alternatives. They might have chosen other ways to struggle with the immorality of Supremacy of superpowers. Due to the two people's wrong choices, the US finally faced various kinds of serious problems. From now on, all the people must be aware of their countries as well- if they saw the bad behaviors of the company, they can just end with referring to what tend of flaws the interprets had done. Thus, I still strongly believe that the whistle blowers must be regarded as a betrayer of country(or nation)

2. 20th century was a 'park age' for China, Korea and Japan. We should admit that the three countries had times of various conflicts towards each other- like the one about 'h otherÇolonization of Japan on Korea'- and is still continuing now. However, thanks to the recovery of the international relationship, Korea and China finally led to 'discussion on korea-china FTA?

South Korea and China have done 6 conferences on whether to establish a tie with an agreement on FTA. If this FTA comes true, both Korea and China would be able to benefit in economical ways of extracting tanff gamers when trading. Due to this, the two countries might be able to supplement each other's shortage on products and resources, and influence each other.
 

However, this can cause some problems. since China's labor rates and prices are cheaper than that of Korea, they are able to develop  and range of agricultures in a large land. If large amounts of cheap rices are imported through korea, the 'Ágricultural Industry' might experience a huge impact, and finally face the crisis to disappear.

To solve this problem, Korea firstly might prepare the alternative ways in case the agreement of being cancelled all of sudden. In addition, if the conference succeeds, the korean government should consider and care more about improvement of breeds and plants such as super crops, super tomatoes and  so on.

There are many lands of conflicts that korea is facing Towards japan, due to the unfortunate event of colonization. However, the most important of all is about 'Dokdo' Since Japan's economy is plummeting in a big rate, they found ways how to turn the crowds interest from economy-and that was Dokdo.

Dokdo had been korea's island full of natural resources from the 4th century. However, Japanese are trying to make the island into theirs, saying that 'Dakeshima is ours,and we made the anniversary on feburary 22th! In fact, all the people should aware that their efforts and basic strategy is that they were going to make Dokdo as a 'war area'and bring it to Ínternational trial center. For them- they are writing large amounts of books so that descendants would believe that  dokdo is their's and sate proofs, for the future.
 

To overcome this problem, Korean Government should acknowledge people to write books about dokdo and do many times on October 25th , the Dokdo's day. It could also be good to promote an advertisement and do a campaign to come to Dokdo and visit its wonderful views. and vAnd we should realize the goals of Japanese on why they are trying to get dokdo from korea. In this way, each people's efforts will gather, and finally show a great power internationally. Thus most important of all understand Korea  and other countries near them.